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    probably the only writing of note to come out of this week's vacation (sigh). -g

    in Nebraska

    if you squint real hard into the west
    in Nebraska
    you can almost see mountains
    on the horizon.
    if you squint hard enough, you can
    almost convince yourself
    that the mountains are really mountains
    and not a clump of trees,
    the length of a train,
    the silhouette of the meat packing plant
    in Schuyler
    that is all that stands

    between me
    and your mountains.

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    Loved it g. Hope youre having a good time out there, and lemme just tell you: "your mountains"! That line literally shocked me. When I read it, I shuddered and involuntarily read the whole thing again. Great way to end.

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    I like it alot gollum. smile

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