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November 27th, 2000, 08:43 PM
#1
Inactive Member
probably the only writing of note to come out of this week's vacation (sigh). -g
in Nebraska
if you squint real hard into the west
in Nebraska
you can almost see mountains
on the horizon.
if you squint hard enough, you can
almost convince yourself
that the mountains are really mountains
and not a clump of trees,
the length of a train,
the silhouette of the meat packing plant
in Schuyler
that is all that stands
between me
and your mountains.
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November 27th, 2000, 09:38 PM
#2
Inactive Member
Loved it g. Hope youre having a good time out there, and lemme just tell you: "your mountains"! That line literally shocked me. When I read it, I shuddered and involuntarily read the whole thing again. Great way to end.
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November 28th, 2000, 01:00 AM
#3
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I like it alot gollum. 
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